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by Strider
SG Commodore
Example(i didn't write this):
"Though he didn't say anything, he could read the Captain's displeasure. "Aye Sir, I'll be right behind you." and he was. A minute after the Captain sat down in his chair, AJ sat beside him, not saying anything, just taking in the Scene. Contrary to what Windfyre may believe, the extra security was essential, though AJ still had a bad feeling about all of this.
Yet there was hope...but it felt more like a flicker than a flame."
Is this better?