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Shining Dust
Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:36 pm
by BlackHole
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:16 am
by Hunter
Truly shining, somewhat relaxing - Could use being a bit longer, considering the genre. Keep up the good work

Re: Shining Dust
Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 7:54 am
by Enzo03
im afraid your music does not pwn...
but this one could be worked with. change some instruments and maybe it could sound good...
i like it, but it does not pwn. maybe i will make my own version of it in impulse tracker... if thats ok with you.
Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 8:49 am
by BlackHole
No, thats not ok with me, because that song has a specific genre and i am not going to go changing insturments, and frankly if you want me to change insturments i am not interested in whatever your going to cook up with my song.
But, out of curiousity, just what insturments need changing? (If you say piano, go pay for your funeral)
Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 4:21 am
by ngtm1r
Pwnage this is not, you've done better. Granted this is, so far, your best attempt at this kind of feel.
(Though I'll hide the body if he says piano.)
Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 7:41 am
by Enzo03
PIANO
ok not really, but i think if you added something to accompany it around the end of the song, it would sound better...
what i dont like is that, uh, whats it called?
well it is in the VERY beginning of the song and plays alot. gives it a techno feel from the start but just grabs any seriousness out of the song and tears it apart
...*sigh* im no musical genius (never said i was) and im never good at explainations.
no, i did NOT cover up my saying PIANO just because YOU say its good. i dunno what else would sound good with that if it were all by itself...
but also that piano has absolutely no chords!
Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 8:05 am
by BlackHole
of COURSE the piano doesn't have any chords - the other insturments provide them. Its a common practice. Perhaps i could have put in a few but it wasn't a completely piano oriented song.
...You don't like my square?

that was my inspiration for the entire song! *sigh*...
I'm currently trying to make a full piano sonata but its difficult. Ugh.
Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 12:55 am
by Enzo03
well it doesnt need to be full of chords, maybe one here or there.
they arent necessary, but usually a piano in a piece would have chords. sounds good enough as it is.
i guess its the square that i dont like. the tune is ok but i really dont like the square. or maybe its just i dont think the tune and the square mix well. i dunno.
Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:13 am
by aldo
Mmmm, I think it sounds too electro-poppy for my tastes, what with the 'boops' and synth.
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 4:44 am
by Enzo03
aldo wrote:Mmmm, I think it sounds too electro-poppy for my tastes, what with the 'boops' and synth.
'boops'...
would that be the square? (just a yes/no question plz dont hit me *hunkers down in fear*)