"Among Shards"

[url]http://www.planetdescent.net/index.php? ... tem;id=280[\url]

Read on for the specific types of opinions I would like to get:

Does it sound cinematic? I'm not a good judge of that because I don't listen to movie soundtracks very much. I got the idea for this track from Daft Punk's soundtrack for Tron Legacy (I do listen to some movie soundtracks), but I would like opinions on whether you think this sounds cinematic, as that's the type of music Dan Wentz is looking for.

Are the instruments good? Is there a place where they could be improved?

What about the music itself?

Does the song flow well?

Thanks in advance.

Hmm, I have the idea that you may want to try 'filling up the spectrum' some more. Currently most of the instruments are concentrated in narrow tone bands, if you get what I mean. Try filling up the quiet bands a little more for a more cinematic feel.

Disclaimer: I don't know squat about music, I may be completely wrong here.

Updated. And this is what everyone was telling me . Luckily someone also told me how to do it.

http://www.planetdescent.net/index.php? ... tem;id=280

Updated the link at the top of the post as well.